The Inheritance Letter
Chapter 4: Breaking the Chain
Thunder rattled the windows as Eliza led Judge Hammond deeper into the sitting room, the flickering firelight casting long shadows across the antique furniture. She directed her phone's flashlight beam away from his vest pocket, though her awareness of the watch inside remained acute.
"Please, make yourself comfortable," she said, gesturing to one of the armchairs flanking the fireplace. "You mentioned receiving a message about this property?"
Hammond settled into the chair with a weariness that suggested more than just physical fatigue. "Yes, quite unexpected. A letter, much like one might receive from a law office, suggesting that information about my late wife's family might be found here at Ravenscroft Manor." He extracted an envelope from his jacket—thick cream paper sealed with crimson wax bearing the now-familiar raven crest.
Eliza's stomach knotted. The same distinctive stationery her grandmother had used.
"When did you receive this?" she asked, taking the envelope with reluctant fingers.
"Just this morning. I would normally dismiss such a cryptic communication, but..." He trailed off, his hand unconsciously moving to the pocket watch chain. "Since Catherine's passing last year, I've been researching her genealogy. It was a project we'd planned to do together in our retirement."
His voice caught slightly. "The letter mentioned possible connections to the Ravenscroft family that seemed to align with gaps in her family tree. I know it's dreadfully rude to arrive unannounced, but something about it felt urgent."
Of course it did, Eliza thought bitterly. Corvus would have ensured the bait was irresistible.
She opened the envelope and removed a single sheet of paper. The handwriting was an impeccable imitation of her grandmother's, but Eliza wasn't fooled. This was Corvus's doing.
"I'm afraid I only inherited this property a week ago, after my grandmother's passing," she said carefully. "I'm still learning about the history myself."
Before Hammond could respond, the lights flickered back to life—the generator Thaddeus had mentioned finally engaging. In the sudden illumination, Eliza could see the judge more clearly: a dignified man with kind eyes reddened from what might have been recent tears.
He smiled apologetically. "Perhaps I've come on a fool's errand. With the storm worsening, I should find lodging in town and return at a more convenient time."
"Nonsense," said a voice from the doorway. Thaddeus stood there, a silver tea service on a tray in his surprisingly steady hands. "No one should venture out in this weather. We have plenty of guest rooms prepared, Judge Hammond."
Eliza shot the caretaker a questioning look, but his expression remained unreadable as he set the tray on a small table between the chairs.
"That's most kind," Hammond said. "If it's truly no imposition..."
"None whatsoever," Thaddeus assured him, pouring tea into delicate china cups. "Miss Finch was about to explore her grandmother's personal papers this evening. Perhaps you might assist each other in your research."
With that loaded suggestion hanging in the air, Thaddeus excused himself, leaving Eliza alone with the man she was supposed to rob.
The judge accepted his teacup with a grateful nod. "Your grandmother—was she Eleanor Finch, by any chance?"
Eliza tensed. "Yes. Did you know her?"
"Not personally, no. But her name appears in some of my wife's effects." Hammond reached into his pocket and withdrew the watch—a gleaming silver timepiece with intricate engravings along its case. "Catherine insisted I take this with me the day she—" He paused, composing himself. "The day she passed. Inside is a photograph, but also a small note with your grandmother's name."
He clicked the watch open, revealing a faded photograph of a smiling woman with warm eyes. Beside it, tucked into the opposite side of the case, was a tiny folded paper.
"May I?" Eliza asked, her heart racing.
Hammond hesitated, then carefully removed the note and handed it to her. The watch remained in his protective grasp.
Eliza unfolded the paper with trembling fingers. In her grandmother's unmistakable handwriting were the words: The music box holds the key. Trust the shadows.
The same phrase from her grandmother's letter.
"Does it mean anything to you?" Hammond asked.
"Possibly," Eliza said, her mind racing. "Judge Hammond, would you excuse me for a moment? There's something I need to check."
Without waiting for his response, she hurried from the room, making for the grand staircase. As she climbed to the second floor, her grandmother's cryptic messages connected in her mind: Trust the shadows. The music box holds the key.
The music box—the one she'd heard playing throughout the house but could never locate. The one Corvus had said was her grandmother's final collection, taken from a foster child.
Eliza reached the master bedroom and stood still, listening. The house was silent but for the storm outside. Then, faintly, she heard it—the delicate melody coming from somewhere nearby.
Following the sound, she moved down the hallway to a small sitting room she hadn't fully explored earlier. The music grew louder as she approached a carved wooden cabinet against the far wall.
With shaking hands, Eliza opened the cabinet doors. Inside sat an ornate music box, its lid raised, a tiny ballerina turning slowly to the haunting melody.
She lifted the music box carefully. It was heavier than it appeared, crafted of dark wood with mother-of-pearl inlays. The base felt unusual, and upon closer inspection, Eliza discovered a hidden compartment. Inside lay a leather-bound journal and a smaller, cloth-wrapped object.
Eliza opened the journal, instantly recognizing her grandmother's handwriting:
October 15, 2022
I have failed. After decades of searching for a way to break the contract, I have run out of time. The doctors give me months at best. My research has led to one possible solution—the contract stipulates that an object's value comes from its being taken unwillingly, causing pain and forfeiting a fragment of the owner's soul. The opposite, then, might create a paradox: a willing sacrifice of one's most treasured possession.
I thought I could do it. I prepared everything—the music box from the Walsh boy was to be my final collection. But when the time came to sacrifice my own treasure in its place, I discovered I am too weak. I cannot part with Mary's music box—the last gift my daughter gave me before the accident that took her and Robert from us. Even to break this cursed contract, I cannot let it go.
And so I must do what I swore I would never do—pass this burden to Eliza. But I leave her what help I can. Perhaps she will succeed where I have failed.
Eliza's vision blurred with tears. The music box had belonged to her mother. The daughter her grandmother had lost—Eliza's mother, who had died with her father in a car accident when Eliza was just three years old. She had so few memories of them, just faded photographs and the stories her grandmother had shared.
She unwrapped the cloth-covered object to find a tarnished key different from the one that had opened the front gate—smaller, more delicate, with the same raven crest as the wax seal.
Footsteps in the hallway made her look up. Thaddeus stood in the doorway, leaning on his cane.
"You found it," he said quietly.
"The music box was my mother's," Eliza said. "My grandmother couldn't bring herself to sacrifice it."
"No. In the end, even knowing it might break the contract, she couldn't part with it." Thaddeus entered the room slowly. "I've served this house for forty-seven years, Miss Finch. I was here when your mother was born, when she grew up, when she visited with her young husband and their baby daughter. I was here when the news came of their accident."
He gestured to the journal. "Eleanor spent decades researching loopholes in the contract. She believed she found one—the paradox of willing sacrifice. An object freely given up holds power opposite to one forcibly taken."
"But she couldn't do it," Eliza said, gently touching the music box.
"No. Mary's box was all she had left of her daughter. Even to save herself, she couldn't surrender it." Thaddeus's eyes were sorrowful. "Instead, she transferred the collector's duty to you, hoping you might find the strength she lacked."
"Or that I might have something else to sacrifice," Eliza said bitterly.
"Perhaps." Thaddeus moved to the window, watching lightning fork across the sky. "The contract specifies that each collection must be made by the full moon. Your grandmother's final collection—the foster boy's music box—was made last month. With her death, the duty passed to you, requiring a new collection."
"Judge Hammond's watch."
"Yes. But there may still be a way to break the chain, if you're willing." He turned back to her. "The paradox your grandmother discovered requires specific circumstances. A collector must refuse to make their assigned collection and instead surrender their own most precious possession—not just any object, but one that holds a piece of their soul."
Eliza thought of Judge Hammond downstairs, the watch containing his beloved wife's photograph clutched protectively in his hand.
"What is your most treasured possession, Miss Finch?" Thaddeus asked softly.
Eliza reached for her neck, where a silver locket had hung since her eighteenth birthday. Inside was the only photograph she had of herself with her parents—a snapshot taken months before their accident. Her grandmother had kept it safe for fifteen years before giving it to Eliza, the only tangible connection to the parents she barely remembered.
"This," she whispered, touching the locket. "But how would giving it up break the contract?"
"The contract feeds on unwilling sacrifice—the pain of loss. A willing sacrifice, freely given with full understanding of its significance, creates a paradox in the magical binding." Thaddeus moved closer, his voice urgent. "But it must be done properly, at the stroke of midnight on the full moon, in the presence of both Corvus and the intended victim."
"Tonight," Eliza realized, glancing at her phone. Just after 11 PM.
"Yes. You have less than an hour to decide." Thaddeus nodded toward the journal. "Your grandmother left instructions. The key opens a compartment in the collection room pedestal that contains the original contract. Both must be present for the breaking."
A floorboard creaked in the hallway. Eliza turned to see Judge Hammond standing there, his expression confused.
"I'm sorry to intrude," he said. "But I couldn't help overhearing. Is something wrong?"
Before Eliza could respond, the temperature in the room plummeted. Frost formed on the windows, and their breath clouded in the sudden cold.
"How touching," came a sibilant voice from the shadows behind Hammond. "A family reunion of sorts."
Corvus materialized, its tall form unfolding from darkness that shouldn't have been able to conceal it. The judge stumbled back with a cry of alarm as the feathered entity glided into the room.
"What is that thing?" Hammond gasped, clutching his watch protectively.
"The true owner of Ravenscroft Manor," Corvus replied, its black eyes fixed on Eliza. "And the patron of the Finch family for generations."
"It's midnight in less than an hour," Eliza said, rising to her feet, the music box clutched in one hand, the locket in the other. "I've made my decision."
Corvus tilted its head at an unnatural angle. "Have you indeed? Will you take the watch, collector? Or forfeit your life?"
"Neither." Eliza met its gaze steadily. "I choose to break the contract."
A sound like ravens' wings filled the room as Corvus's form expanded, shadows deepening around it. "You cannot break what has bound your bloodline for centuries."
"We'll see about that," Eliza said. She turned to Hammond, who stood frozen in shock. "Judge Hammond, I need you to come with me. I promise to explain everything, but right now, I need you to trust me."
To her surprise, the judge straightened his shoulders and nodded. "Lead the way, Miss Finch."
"This will be amusing," Corvus hissed, its form dissolving into shadow. "I shall await you below."
Thaddeus pressed a hand to Eliza's arm. "Be careful. Corvus will fight to preserve the contract. It has fed on these collections for too long to surrender easily."
"Come with us," Eliza urged.
The old caretaker shook his head. "My role ends here, Miss Finch. I have served this house and its secrets long enough. It's time for someone else to decide its fate."
With that cryptic statement, he gestured for them to go.
Eliza led Hammond to the library, explaining as much as she dared about her family's dark legacy as they walked. To her relief, rather than dismissing her story as madness, the judge listened with growing comprehension.
"I've been a judge for thirty years, Miss Finch," he said as they reached the library. "I've presided over enough cases to know that evil takes many forms, some more... unconventional than others."
At the bookcase, Eliza hesitated. "The thing you saw—Corvus—it wants me to steal your pocket watch. The one with your wife's photograph."
Hammond's hand went to his vest. "Why this? There are far more valuable things—"
"It's not about monetary value," Eliza explained, pulling the bookcase open to reveal the hidden passage. "It's about emotional significance. The watch contains your connection to your wife—a fragment of your soul."
Understanding dawned in Hammond's eyes. "And this creature... feeds on such connections?"
"Yes. My family has been collecting for it for generations, in exchange for prosperity." Eliza gestured to the staircase. "I intend to end it tonight, but I need your help."
The judge squared his shoulders. "My Catherine would have done the same. Lead on."
They descended to the collection room, where the gas lamps were already lit, casting their golden glow across the thousands of stolen treasures. Corvus awaited them at the central pedestal, its form seeming to absorb the light around it.
"How theatrical," it commented as they approached. "Bringing the victim to witness your first collection—or your last breath. Which will it be, Elizabeth Finch?"
Eliza set her grandmother's journal and the music box on the pedestal beside the ledger. "Neither. I've come to invoke the paradox of willing sacrifice."
For the first time, Corvus's composure faltered. "Impossible. The old woman failed. The sacrifice must be genuine—a true piece of one's soul."
"I know." Eliza reached for her locket, unclasping it from around her neck. "My grandmother couldn't sacrifice her last connection to her daughter. But I can sacrifice my last connection to my parents."
She held up the locket, the silver catching the light. "This contains the only photograph I have of my parents and me together. They died when I was three. I barely remember them. But this—this holds what little I have of them."
"A touching trinket," Corvus scoffed, though its eyes tracked the locket with unsettling intensity. "But the contract is specific. The sacrifice must be made in place of a collection, at the moment of the full moon."
"Which is in exactly two minutes," Eliza said, glancing at her phone. "And I am making it in place of taking Judge Hammond's watch."
She turned to the judge. "I need you to witness this. To understand what's happening."
Hammond nodded, his expression solemn. "I do."
Eliza slid her grandmother's key into a previously unseen keyhole in the side of the pedestal. A compartment opened, revealing a yellowed document covered in spidery writing—the original contract.
"With one minute until midnight on the full moon," Eliza declared formally, "I, Elizabeth Jane Finch, the designated collector, refuse to take William Hammond's pocket watch. Instead, I freely and willingly sacrifice my most treasured possession—this locket containing the only image I have of my parents."
She placed the locket on the contract. "I understand fully what I am giving up. I choose this sacrifice to break the chain that has bound my family for generations."
Corvus shrieked, a sound like tearing metal. "No! The contract cannot—"
The clock on Eliza's phone struck midnight. A beam of moonlight broke through the ceiling—impossible given that they were underground, yet undeniably real—striking the locket where it lay on the ancient contract.
The metal began to glow, not with reflection but with an inner light that spread to the contract beneath it. The paper curled at the edges, smoke rising from the ink as if it were burning without flame.
"What have you done?" Corvus howled, lunging for the pedestal.
Eliza stood her ground. "Created a paradox. The contract feeds on unwilling loss—the pain of having something precious taken. But I've given up my treasure willingly, with full understanding of its worth."
The contract was now glowing entirely, the words visibly rearranging themselves on the page. The ledger beside it began to smoke as well, pages fluttering as if caught in a wind.
"No!" Corvus's form flickered like a faulty television signal, stretching and compressing. "The collections—they're mine!"
All around them, the objects on the countless shelves began to emit the same inner light as the locket. Labels curled and burned away. Glass cases shattered. The entire chamber trembled.
Hammond gripped Eliza's arm. "I think we should leave. Now."
She nodded, snatching up her grandmother's journal and the music box as the floor beneath them heaved like a ship in a storm. They ran for the staircase as chunks of ceiling began to fall, narrowly avoiding a shelf that toppled with a crash of breaking glass and splintering wood.
Behind them, Corvus's shrieks rose to an unbearable pitch, its form dissolving into a writhing mass of feathers and shadow that seemed to be pulled toward the glowing contract as if by a powerful vacuum.
They reached the stairs and began to climb, the rumbling intensifying. By the time they reached the library, the entire manor was shaking. Books tumbled from shelves, furniture slid across the floor, and cracks appeared in the walls.
"The house is collapsing!" Hammond shouted over the din. "We need to get out!"
Eliza led the way through the chaos, clutching the music box to her chest as they navigated falling debris and buckling floors. They reached the foyer just as the grand staircase collapsed behind them in a cloud of dust and splintered wood.
The front door stood open, rain and wind whipping inside. Beyond, Eliza could see Thaddeus standing in the driveway beside his own ancient car and Hammond's modern sedan, gesturing urgently for them to hurry.
They sprinted across the foyer and down the steps, the rumbling growing louder behind them. As they reached the vehicles, Eliza turned for one last look at Ravenscroft Manor.
The grand house was being consumed from within, walls crumbling, windows shattering, the central tower listing dangerously to one side. The ground split between the house and the driveway, a chasm opening that widened by the second, severing the manor from the outside world.
"Get in!" Thaddeus shouted.
Eliza hesitated. "My car—"
"Is lost," the caretaker said firmly. "As is everything else in that house. A small price to pay."
They piled into Hammond's car, the judge gunning the engine as soon as they were inside. The vehicle fishtailed down the muddy driveway, headlights illuminating sheets of rain as they raced for the gate.
In the rearview mirror, Eliza watched Ravenscroft Manor fold in on itself like a house of cards, the earth opening to swallow the structure that had stood for over a century. The collection room with its thousands of stolen treasures, the hidden passages, the grand staircase—all of it disappearing into a sinkhole that seemed to have no bottom.
With Corvus trapped inside.
They burst through the gate just as the last of the manor disappeared from view, leaving nothing but a gaping wound in the earth where it had stood. The judge kept driving until they reached the coastal road, where he finally pulled over, hands shaking on the steering wheel.
"Is it over?" he asked, voice hoarse.
"The contract is broken," Thaddeus confirmed from the backseat. "The collection chamber destroyed. Corvus is... contained, if not destroyed. It will be centuries before it can manifest again, if ever."
Eliza sat silently, the music box in her lap, her hand going to her bare neck where the locket had hung for a decade.
"I'm sorry about your locket," Hammond said gently. "About the photograph of your parents."
She nodded, unable to speak past the lump in her throat. The sacrifice had been necessary, but the loss felt raw, a physical ache in her chest.
"What will you do now?" Hammond asked.
"I don't know," Eliza admitted. "Start over, I suppose."
"You broke a chain that has bound your family for generations," Thaddeus said. "That is no small legacy, Miss Finch."
As the storm began to ease, they drove to Blackmere Point, where Hammond arranged rooms for them at the small inn. Eliza fell into an exhausted sleep, the music box beside her bed, playing its delicate melody as she drifted off.
The next morning dawned clear and bright, the storm having passed in the night. Eliza stood at the edge of the property that had briefly been hers, now nothing more than a massive crater surrounded by the still-standing stone wall.
Thaddeus joined her, looking smaller and more frail in the daylight, yet somehow unburdened.
"The contract is fulfilled," he said. "Your sacrifice created the paradox your grandmother sought. Corvus is banished, the collections buried."
"And the cost was just my locket," Eliza mused, still feeling its absence keenly.
"And Ravenscroft Manor. And two centuries of ill-gotten prosperity." Thaddeus smiled sadly. "But you've freed all future generations of Finches from the burden."
"What will you do now?" Eliza asked him.
"My service to the house is complete. I've been bound here almost as surely as your family was." He straightened, suddenly looking years younger. "I think I'll travel. There's a world I've never seen beyond these walls."
As they turned to leave, Eliza noticed something glinting in the rubble at the edge of the crater—a small object that caught the morning sun. She carefully picked her way forward and bent to retrieve it.
The music box.
Somehow intact despite the manor's destruction, its delicate mechanism still functioning when she opened the lid. The ballerina still turned to the haunting melody, the same one that had guided her through the house.
"Your grandmother's most treasured possession," Thaddeus observed. "The one thing she couldn't surrender, even to break the contract."
"And now it's returned to me," Eliza said wonderingly, cradling the box.
Inside, where she had found her grandmother's journal, now lay something else—a small, tarnished locket. Her locket, somehow restored from the paradox at the heart of the contract's breaking.
With trembling fingers, Eliza opened it to find the photograph inside—herself as a toddler, held between her smiling parents.
"A final gift," Thaddeus said softly. "Not everything was lost in the breaking."
Eliza clasped the locket around her neck once more, the familiar weight settling against her skin. She closed the music box, silencing its melody for now, and turned away from the ruins of Ravenscroft Manor.
The inheritance her grandmother had left her wasn't the house or its dark legacy, but the courage to break the chain—to choose sacrifice over suffering, to end centuries of pain with a single act of willing surrender.
As she walked away from the property for the final time, Eliza felt lighter than she had in years. The raven's crest no longer hung over her family's future. The collection was buried. The contract was broken.
And the music box in her hands contained not just memories of the past, but the promise of a future free from ancient bargains and their terrible prices.
Some inheritances, it seemed, were worth the cost after all.